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		<title>Fresh Look at Neutral Zone</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Jun 2009 16:59:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Since the Delacorte contest rejection last month, I&#8217;ve read over Neutral Zone again. It was the first read since I put it in the mail on December 31. I remain pleased with the manuscript I delivered for judging. However, now that I am free of the length constraints imposed by the contest, I am restoring [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since the Delacorte contest rejection last month, I&#8217;ve read over <em>Neutral Zone</em> again. It was the first read since I put it in the mail on December 31. I remain pleased with the manuscript I delivered for judging. However, now that I am free of the length constraints imposed by the contest, I am restoring a couple of scenes that I cut and I&#8217;m also giving it another complete once-over.</p>
<p>In the months since I submitted, I&#8217;ve read three books that have influenced how I feel about the characters in the <em>Neutral Zone</em>. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/dp/0525479961?tag=coolcinematra-20&amp;link_code=as3&amp;creativeASIN=0525479961&amp;creative=373489&amp;camp=211189" target="_blank"><em>Out of the Pocket</em></a> by Bill Konigsberg (<a href="http://www.jeffandwill.com/2009/06/02/out-of-the-pocket-by-bill-konigsberg/" target="_blank">read review</a>), which I finished just last week. It featured a main character whose voice is so loud and clear that I&#8217;m re-looking at Simon to make sure he&#8217;s as strong.</p>
<p>Two other books that I&#8217;ve drawn inspiration from are Martin Wilson&#8217;s <a href="http://www.amazon.com/dp/0385735073?tag=coolcinematra-20&amp;link_code=as3&amp;creativeASIN=0385735073&amp;creative=373489&amp;camp=211189" target="_blank"><em>What They Always Tell Us</em></a> (<a href="http://www.jeffandwill.com/2009/01/14/what-they-always-tell-us-by-martin-wilson/" target="_blank">read review</a>) and <a href="http://www.amazon.com/dp/1440436010?tag=coolcinematra-20&amp;link_code=as3&amp;creativeASIN=1440436010&amp;creative=373489&amp;camp=211189" target="_blank"><em>Power Play</em></a> by J.M. Snyder (<a href="http://www.jeffandwill.com/2009/04/07/power-play-by-jm-snyder/" target="_blank">read review</a>). Wilson&#8217;s book, among other things, featured a very strong, tight plot that I admired and as I&#8217;m re-editing I&#8217;d like to live up to his standards. Snyder&#8217;s book, though not classified as YA, does deal with young people. The emotional connection and passion between her main characters is also something I want to make sure comes through with Simon and Alex.</p>
<p>With all this swirling in my head, I&#8217;m working through the pages and making enhancements/edits. I also need to start researching agents who tend to work with YA/gay fiction and create the all important documents that I would send to them to entice them into looking at this work.</p>
<p>Meanwhile, in the midst of all this, I finished the first draft of a short story that is a sequel to <em>Neutral Zone</em>. It takes place two years after the events in the book. I realize it will be a while before that sees the light of day, but it was screaming to get on to the paper so I spent a few days to make that happen.</p>
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<p>By the way, there was a winner in the Delacorte contest this year: <em>Something Like Hope</em> by Shawn Goodman. It&#8217;s good to see that someone wowed the judges this year after two years of no winners. I can&#8217;t find any information on what the novel is about, but congrats to Shawn anyway.</p>
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